@JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! She knew it didn't mean the weather, it was going to be bright and sunny all day. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. N Eddy's big picture show . Luna. But dont worry, youre still a great writer. helluvaboss. Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. It really doesn't. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. They were my favourite! Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Trivia. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! Lola yelled. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. I even threatened you to go to my game! Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! Can you check on the computer and see who's staying in this room." "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." Lincoln: Well, this was cool. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. As much as she didn't want to, she knew that slamming the door in his face would make the situation even worse than it already was, so she opened the door enough for him to get in. "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. And I HATE LEECHES!" Everyone finally realized that what they've done. I don't need anyone! I have failed as a human being. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? (thinks for a minute) "Hmm. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" Am. Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? White hair extended ending9. Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. Ruth said, curious to where this was going. Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. Keep on writing fics like this! Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. We didn't find any though." (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. You overreact to everything! Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." "They have a point there honey," Lynn Sr. said, before immediately clasping his mouth shut, his wife glaring at him for saying that. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. lincoln. Hmm. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. NOBODY!!! The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! Eventually, Rita broke the long silence, saying, "Kids, I know you're angry at us for causing us to be kicked out of the hotel. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. Later, in jail). (Cries) All my precious tiaras. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). (With his remaining strength, he scrambles over to the house. Luna put. Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." "you bad luck, Lincoln!" No more Loud Family? She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. I ADMIT IT!!! Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. EVER!! This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. Even you Lisa! YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. Understood?!" He managed to, but with a twist. Im melting! Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? "What do you kids want?" We are no longer grounded to the room. He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. We need it! ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! loud. "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." Luna blushed. I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud were in the spa, trying to get their minds off the trouble their kids caused yesterday. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! Lincoln: (tearful) No! Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. You just mess up everything! The entire lobby was destroyed, couches were stomped beyond recognition, lamps and desks were thrown and broken, hotel luggage carts were somehow damaged beyond repair and some people were hurt (another author interruption sorry: not severely, mind you, but enough that they were going to feel pain tomorrow and the next few days). The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' (he goes to the living room window. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. Now we've broken the shower." QUIET! All of you!" Lori finished with. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. Lincoln: I said NO! This article should a part 2 episode in Season 5. It was against the law. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. 902 8 2. ", Lincoln: "No. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. Luan added. Lana said, glaring at her parents. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." Lisa responded with in her genius talk. "Do you have any idea how guilty you made us feel for possibly ruining your vacation for acting like ourselves?" No Such Luck/Frog Wild Episode aired Mar 14, 2017 TV-Y7 22 m IMDb RATING 5.1 /10 218 YOUR RATING Rate Animation Adventure Comedy Lincoln is rejected by his sisters because he is "bad luck"; Lincoln and Lana protect the frogs from being dissected. Lincoln: I admit, it was stupid of me to drag that lie on, but while i learn an important lesson not to be a fibber more than i needed, what do you numbnuts learn!? Post-Story Notice: Anyway. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" The heat increases. Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." Except for Lynn). I cant take a moment more of this! That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. "Yeah, brah." See if I care! Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. Lynn Sr. asked. Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? Can you please just come down here? But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! I'm not. [The softball playoffs. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! I need a very big, long rest from them. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Don't fight now! You all are really, really bad luck! "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". I feel like a fool! I hate golf! Lynn: HUH!?!?! The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! (facepalms. Not you or Lucy. Lincoln: No! Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! I was horrible to you! ", [Later, they arrive back in their house.]. (cries). I don't want you quit something you love because of me. MY TROPHIES!!! ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? Lana: Gee. I HATE THIS!!! ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! Sell custom creations to people who love your style. (turns his attention to Luna) "Luna, remember when we went to that SMOOCH concert? Ive put up with your insults, your immaturity, your punches, your violence, your madness, your lack of manners, your stubbornness and your attitude and after today, ive well and truly had it! Angus: Oh do tell. My team needs that! Lola: Hey, Lincoln! NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! Why? After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. SQUIRRELS WIN!" Lincoln: I don't believe it! The Loud siblings appeared in the lobby, completely red in the face, as angry as a bull seeing red and they looked ready to destroy everything in their path. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. Why are you being arrested?! Spell it out alt ending7. "Listen to what?" I'll keep it between the both of us. At least this thick skin won't let me down! First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. I have just had it! Taking the device out of the girl's hand. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! Lincoln and the parents come up.]. (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." They also saw Lori in the front seat, Lynn Sr. knocked on the window. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" Lucy. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Let me tell you this! As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. She pointed to the back row of seats. Status Update. Luna: I dont know. We don't need to get violent here. How can I help you?" Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. I hate concerts! And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. Lincoln asked his parents. Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. SQUIRRELS WIN! Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Let's go! Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. You're all just pure wastes of life! Lynn: NO! They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. And if you do, I'll have you arrested! I already told you, I live here. "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? *, Lincoln: It's not fair. Lola finished with. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! I heard you scream! Lola: How could he?! And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. All of a sudden another 6-year old wearing a princess gown snatched the walkie talkie out of Felix's hand and said, "All right lady. Lincoln: AND I NEVER, EVER WANT TO SEE YOU UNLUCKY PARASITES IN MY LIFE AGAIN!!! The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. We wont! The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. Luna: [Blushes] Really? (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. He really doesn't like us at all does he? But, if what this guy was saying is true, then the only reason the room would show up as vacant is if the family was checking out. And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Nobody ruins my life, casts me out and then uses me, understand!? ", (Lynn starts running towards him. They were wondering how could this room be these three idiots, they were booked until tomorrow. "Aren't you guys going to help us?" *Sniff* I thought he liked our things! He's just really mad, isn't he? Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. ", (the sisters cheers. (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. Journal. And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). Lincoln: (to the viewers) Welp, I may be forced to stay here for quite a long time, but at least I finally got away from my so-called "family"! ), Lincoln: But you know what!? Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. What kind of parents would do that? "EXCUSE ME???!!!" Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. Brawl in the family alt ending8. What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. Lincoln: You know what!? *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. Give it back! Luan brought it. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. One of the Boys alt ending4. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully!